Thursday 1 March 2018

Falling off the ledge

The noise is getting closer. The rumbling of cars passing through. The air is hitting her body like a boxing match. A punch to the side a punch in the gut. Her stomach has a strange feeling in her stomach. Heights were never a fear that she ever concurred. They always made her feel smaller than what she actually was. The moment seems like it is never going to end.

She reminds herself that it will end with pain and blood and she is ready for it. The last time she will experience pain. There are regrets she carries but then that what defines regret.

Maybe she won't. The body touches the ground. Gravity crushing her spinal cord splitting her skull in half with brain splattered all over the road. Half of her bones are disconnected and the life in her body has vanished

Tuesday 4 September 2012

The Objective

The Objective

Chapter 1

“Do you know what you have done” sharansh said.
“yes”raj said.
“I am rusticate you for this do you know that”
.”Yes but it wasn’t my fault” raj said.
“Well if I won’t rusticate you then you can have a special job that’s mend for you sweeping the floor. Now get the hell out of here and don’t show me your face again” sharansh.
“go to hell" raj said leaving the building.he removed his car keys and unlocked his car.
a bullet was shot hitting the petrol tank.The car blasts raj is on the ground trying to get up.
(Few Days Ago)
“please don’t do it please leave me” .raj said. His colleagues’ were dragging him all of sudden it was raining.
“get up asshole boss is calling you”came a voice.
All of a sudden raj falls he realising he was dreaming. He cheacked himshelf he was in a mess he tried to make himself normal.
Raj was a simple looking guy .If he dint shave for some time people miss took him for terrorist. He wasn’t a terrorist he was working for CIA.
He entered the room “sir” he said coming in” you called me “he said still in a very sleepy tone.
“woo now you even sleep in office thats good” sharansh said. sharansh was his boss the head of CIA. He was quite weird in his own way looking some kind of nerdy professor than
a CIA head his hair was all lost in the mist of work.
“sir I was not sleeping I was researching” raj said.
“ohh and what abou the case i have given you”. Sharansh said.
“sir i was saying about it only”. Raj said.
“I know you cant handle this case thats why i am appointing two more officers to help you find the bomb” sharansh said.
Raj left the office
Two people were standing there waiting for him. He approached them. One of them coming forward and saying” hi my name is parth. I am trained in combating and using weapons ”. The other waving her hand saying “my name is shruti. I am an bomb expert I know to defuse any kind of bomb”. Raj shaking his hand with parth ” my name is raj i am assigned this mission good to have you on board can you just wait a minute in conference room so that i can brief you about the mission”.
Conference room was large enough to accommodate almost 50 people but looked empty if only 2 people sat. Raj entered pushing the door.
“Here are the list of the top suspects we have and here are the details of our mission”. Raj said pushing the file towards them.
“according to the intelligence there is going to be a bomb blast. We don’t know who are they or what they do it may take place any where in the country the list of suspects include people who supply materials for making bomb and guns we have to find any one of them and know where this blast is going to take place. We have to find the and stop the before they blast any place and kill people”.
“raj i got a phone from the cops they have found algar roaming around trying to find something this is the time we can catch him”. Parth said.
“Lets go” raj said.
Interrogation room
“where is the bomb”
“i don’t know anything about the bomb”
“tell me where are they going to blast the bomb”
“sir i don’t know only some people came to me asking for bombs and guns”
“who asked for bombs”
“sir i can tell him to meet me at the place you tell”
“ok”
The place of meet
“where the hell is he” parth said.
“he will come sir don’t worry he has given me half the money he needs arms to fight you” algar said.
Somebody was coming.
Suddenly raj’s phone rang shanransh was on the other side he said something that stunned him.” Guys they have found a bomb in Mumbai”as he finished a bullet strucked algar ripping his heart killing him .”oh shit” said raj.
Chapter 2
raj was shocked at the blast .parth was trying to open his door when someone pulled his leg and dragged him.he tried hard and the rope broke.he was trying to get up when he heard his phone ringing it had fallen from his pocket he tried and reached out to it.it was raj on the other side.
"hey I was attacked " raj said.
"you too I was also attacked " parth said.
"maybe shruti was also attacked I will try to call her met me at her home"said raj.
he got a message from raj saying that shruti is not picking up her phone.
party reached shruti's home.it was old building with two floors only raj was already standing there he said"the shooter maybe in his position we have to be careful if he sees us ".they entered the building carefully.shruti was trying to find her mobile when someone suddenly somebody started shooting at her. raj comes smashing the door saving her from the bullets.party hits the shooter and a huge fight takes place.at last they capture him.they interrogate him but he doesnt know anything.he gets a phone call from the contracter who had given him the money to kill them.he is called at the cafe by the contracter to give his payment .the contracter face could not be seen by anyone.raj,shruti and parth were hiding at a distance they could not see the face of the killer.suddenly the shooter was killed.everybody was shocked .raj started running from he pulled them out of there parth hitting raj " why the hell are we running we didn't do anything wrong"
raj said" be calm I know we didn't do anything wrong but we need to prove it and for finding who killed the shooter I have an idea".
"please sir give me some money please my father is dying"
"ok ok stop crying here is some money"
he gives him some money suddenly someone pulls him back
"hey leave.......... oh suks raj I didn't stole the money"said the thief.
"i know it, we need your help" said raj.they go to his house.
"why should I help you always you catch me and throw me in the prison"
"we know but if you will help me we can remove your record completely there would be no one of your name in our records"
"ok"said the thief.
"find me all the phones active in the cafe"
after sometime he pulls out numbers that were working.
"here are the numbers working" the thief said.
"now tell me if any of this numbers are switch off and if you find someone get me the numbers were called" said raj.
after sometime he pulled another list
"here there are two numbers which are switched off now"
raj checks the list and he is shocked
"bloody hell this can't happen"raj said.
"what happened" said parth.
"this is our bureau no" said raj.
"so you thought you can get away with it" said raj.
"what the hell are you saying raj and what the hell are you doing in my office" said sharansh.
"you planted the bombs you were the mastermind behind it you pulled us out so that you can carry out your mission" said raj.
"what the hell are you talking about"
said sharansh.
"you knew where the bombs are don't you" said raj.
"what can you do about it I will pull a trigger and everything will be finished" sharansh said.
" you can't finish anything" raj said.
" shut the hell up I can blow you"
said sharansh.
"no you can't" raj said.
sharansh pulled the trigger.
"wrong choice"
the building blasts


the end

Sunday 2 September 2012

Review of Doctor Who season 7

Doctor who returned to BBC on 1st September with a bang.first of all I will clear it that I haven't seen any of the previous seasons of Doctor Who what so ever.
The plot is Kidnapped by his oldest foe, the Doctor is
forced on an impossible mission - to a
place even the Daleks are too terrified to
enter.... the Asylum. A planetary prison
confining the most terrifying and insane of
their kind, the Doctor and the Ponds must
find an escape route. But with Amy and
Rory's relationship in meltdown, and an
army of mad Daleks closing in, it is up to
the Doctor to save their lives, as well as the
Pond's marriage.
Now my opinion is its good not smart but good and as always steven Moffat is the best if you can see it its good

Published with Blogger-droid v2.0.9

my life sucks

Sorry for not posting anything I will post really early and it will be the latest white collar episode review and will also post short stories

Published with Blogger-droid v2.0.9

Saturday 14 July 2012

White Collar Season 4 Review

As you know season 4 has not premiere in India. The last season was premired and ended on on Friday 13th July. The season ended with Neal escaping. I saw the first episode of season 4 Oh, welcome back, Neal! White Collar
returned this week with its Season 4
premiere "Wanted," a big deviation from
formula that was as relaxed as it was
high-stakes. About six weeks had passed
since Peter silently signaled Neal to flee
the country and Neal had hopped a flight
with Mozzie to some unspecified locale.
Apparently Neal's absence had taken its
toll on Peter (understandable!), not only
because of Peter's mixed emotions
toward Neal's escape, but also because
Peter's bossman was still mad about it
and assigning Peter only the worst cases.
But Peter's sad and resigned attitude
changed upon the arrival of an
intimidating International Affairs Agent
(Mekhi Phifer) with a reputation for
bringing home criminals in body bags.
Uh-oh, it looked like Neal was suddenly in
more trouble than before!
As for Neal himself, he and Mozzie were
hiding out on an island that looked A LOT
like Puerto Rico but that we later came to
find out was Cape Verde, an extradition-
free paradise where the hats are fine and
the baristas finer. Neal (operating under
the alias of John Maine) was doing a
GREAT job of blending in so far:
gallivanting around the marketplace
handing out cash to street musicians and
fruit vendors while conspicuously
romancing women and, you know,
LOOKING LIKE Matt Bomer. Laying low,
basically. Neal and Mozzie were also
paying cash to a local ex-pat tycoon in
exchange for safe harbor in town. If that
sounds shady, that's because it WAAAASS.
Never trust a cigar-chomping tycoon who
accepts cash payments to pay off the
local police; it's just bad times. On the
upside, though, Neil was getting tons of
good sand-castle-building time in, and his
mini replica of Manhattan went a long
way toward getting him some action with
the hot local barista lady. If ladies love
anything, it's immaculately constructed
sandcastle skylines! Because LOOKING
LIKE Matt Bomer just isn't enough these
days?
Like all good federal agents, Peter
brought his wife on a stakeout, in this
case at the home of the gray-haired lady
with whom Neal met up in the Season 3
finale. You know, whatsherface. The one
who knew his parents. Anyway, after Peter
knocked on her door and failed to
convince her that he was one of the good
cops, Elizabeth ended up going behind
Peter's back and winning the lady over to
the cause of helping Neal evade capture.
Pretty soon this Ellen lady was spillin' the
digits to Neal's super secret pager and
Peter and Neal enjoyed their first phone
conversation in a long time! And boy did
they gab.
But Peter had more up his sleeve than
just callin' to gossip with an old friend:
He'd recorded the phone call and
intended to use the recording to track
down where Neal was. Diana and (newly
minted series regular?) Jones came over
for a highly preposterous sleuthing
session in which they traced the sound of
bells ringing on Neal's end to a specific
church in Cape Verde. Good sleuthing!
Except, whoops, technically what they did
was called 'obstruction of justice' and
pretty soon the Mekhi Phifer character
was searching Peter's joint, and Peter
ended up getting suspended from work.
Poor Peter! Except, don't feel too bad for
him because he immediately boarded a
plan to go track down his dreamy bestie.
Unfortunately the evil agent beat Peter
there and to add insult to injury, he
enlisted tons of greedy locals to track
down Neal and kill him if necessary. Well,
he didn't say to kill him, exactly, but it
was implied. At this point a child stole
Peter's wallet and ran through the streets
of Cape Verde only to lead Peter to Neal's
hiding spot on a grotto somewhere, I
don't know. But man if Peter didn't look
like the HAPPIEST guy in the world!
Seriously, it was just this long, lingering,
closed-eye, cheek-to-cheek hug. It's how
ANY of us would hug Neal, be honest. But
seriously, it was a touching moment for
sure.
At this point Peter, Neal, and Mozzie
scrambled for an escape route off the
island. After running through the streets
punching attackers in their faces, they
eventually split up: Neal hopped on the
back of the sexy barista's Vespa while
Peter and Mozzie headed to the marina to
bribe a captain or something. But when
Neal swung by the shady cigar-chomping
tycoon's place, it wasn't long before he
realized he'd been sold out! That's when
Mekhi Phifer arrived with a gun and we
cut to black. Cliffhanger!
For an average episode of White Collar,
"Wanted" was pretty different in a couple
of important ways: No big crime, no
elaborate heist, very little Peter-Neal
banter. But the main thing it had going
for it was the heartfelt longing between
these characters, and how much we as an
audience want to see everybody find their
places and return to the status quo. It
was a good status quo! So the temporary
diversion into tropical paradise is a
refreshing change of pace so far, but I'm
definitely eager for the main partnership
to get back to work. I love escapist
entertainment where characters do their
jobs competently.
going to see white collar season 4 and the dark knight rises will surely give reviews

Thursday 5 July 2012

hey there i have drafted the first chapter i will put it as soon as it will finish it requires slight modification